Really enjoyed this! A nice little experience. I do think it would have benefitted from programming it so the text appears wherever you're facing and that you only need to search for it when it's going to be powerful, like when looking back at the lit road to the dock.
Anyone playing this will already look around at the environment so you don't need the text to shift as a way of forcing them to check out the surroundings, only as a way to guide them to something specific and meaningful to what's being said.
Really good job, though. Very nice touch having the clouds move in a circular pattern and speed up over time. Perfect song for it as well. Maybe the end should slow down a bit since it cuts off so quickly I barely got to see the sunset for half a second before the game jumped to credits. Great job regardless!